Write an 800-word paper that makes an argument related to this story and the concept of heroism
Write an 800-word paper that makes an argument related to this story and the concept of heroism based on pages 6-108 of the uploaded e-book and I will also upload my essay draft, which I got a D- grade on.
here are my teacher’s comments on my essay draft:
1) your thesis statement does not take a clear position on the assigned subject, is significantly underdeveloped, or is written in a confusing manner.
2) your Paper contains some relevant evidence but may contain too much summary or description. Citations are present but inconsistent or incorrect.
3) Paper has either no organizational pattern or one that is contradictory. The Paper is disorganized to the point where it is hard to understand.
4) Sentences may be awkward or repetitive, vocabulary may be limited or used incorrectly. There are significant grammatical errors.
please edit my essay and correct the issues, and make sure that the thesis statement is very clear and supported with an organized argument, and use quotes or examples from the novel to support the argument.
please don’t use any sources
|Academic Level||College (3-4 years: Junior, Senior)|
|Paper Type||Argumentative essays|
|Number of Pages||3 Page(s)/825 words|